The Plain English movement is now several decades old. But as a professional editor, I’m still astonished at the wordy and legalese-laden documents out there. Whether you’re bumping up against page limits or just want your document to be more readable, consider substituting the following Plain English phrases. Contrary to what you might think, using Plain English won’t dumb down your document. It’s actually far harder to write simply – but that’s why clients pay you the big bucks.
Wordy → Plain English
Prior to → before
At the present time → now
In the event that → if
Provided that → if
Set forth in → in
In order that/to/for → so/to/for
A large number of → many
Pertaining to → about, of
As a means of → to
Acquire → get
Successfully finish/accomplish → finish/accomplish
Until such time as → until
Purchase → buy
Is authorized to → can, may
Adjacent to → next to, near
Utilize → use
Is responsible for → handles
Until such time as → until
With the exception of → except for
Locate → find
A number of → some, many
Is unable to → cannot
Due to the fact that → because
Make reference to → refer to
At no time → never
Commence → start
With the exception of → except, except for
Take into consideration → consider
In excess of → more than
In close proximity → near
On a number of occasions → often, sometimes
Take action to → [ditch and don’t replace]
During such time as → while
With reference to → about
Despite the fact that → despite, though
In relation to → about, to, with
During the course of → during
The month of → [ditch and don’t replace]
In a timely manner → on time, promptly
Subsequent to → after
Sufficient number of → enough
Of course, your first draft will be littered with the wordier, stuffier phrases. That’s okay – that’s what first drafts are for. Just be on the lookout for Plain English replacements while editing.
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